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Old 29-10-2011, 12:23 PM
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Re: My short story

Ok, not much response from last night.

Do indicate if the story deserves to carry on.
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Re: My short story

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Ok, not much response from last night.

Do indicate if the story deserves to carry on.
Friday night usually very quiet. Pls carry on share.
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Re: My short story

Keep on writing, bro.
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Re: My short story

good story.
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Re: My short story

I shall continue the last part of the story. Apologies for the slow updates; I was out watching soccer matches with friends.

So, after the inter-sem exam, it was the start of year 3. But in between we still exchanged smses, whatsapp, fb wall comments and so on. We met a few times, purely for meals, and I gave her a present for her birthday.

School was normal, but lab was still with her, fortunately. However, no more erotic encounters as we were both busy with our own timetables. We still meet in school for lunch sometimes. And it was during one of the lunches that led to the incident last Saturday.

Judy: Suddenly got so many new faces in our faculty.
Me: Yah lo, new faces in LT. I think due to IA bah. Wonder why year 1 and year 2 never see them before.

For people who know, in year 3, there's only 1 semester. The other one is meant for Industrial Attachment (IA). So there is a chance to see people whom you have never really seen before because, due to some kind of chance/luck/fate, they have been taking different modules from you since year 1.

Judy: You never observe your surroundings well enough la!
Me: Say me?! You just said there are so many new faces around!
Judy: I was testing you!
Me: Nonsense.
Judy: Haha! Come to think of it, if this sem got so many people in the LT, then next sem will have very few people.. Then campus will be so empty! So shiok!
Me: Maybe bah. But its the vibrancy of the campus that makes campus life interesting mah. No meh?
Judy: Waa, first time see you say something so intellectual. Impressive.
Me: Yah, so please learn from me. You're like so far away behind me.
Judy: *killer eyes looks*
Me: This sem's modules can cope or not?
Judy: More or less la..
Me: Then ok la.
Judy: Have you reached your 2nd upper?
Me: Yes!! After getting A for that ****** (inter-sem module code), I am 4.01 now!
Judy: Waa! 恭喜恭喜! Lucky you didn't SU that module!
Me: Yah lo! But now I got ensure I get at least B+ for all my modules to maintain this 2nd upper.
Judy: Aiya.. just study hard lo.
Me: Tiring leh.. everyday study.
Judy: No life hor.
Me: Yah lo!
Judy: Tomorrow I'm going clubbing at **** (name of club), wanna join me to get some life back?
Me: CLUBBING?! I have.. never clubbed before.
Judy: SERIOUSLY?~~
Me: Yah lo.. all my closer friends don't club too.. but I don't mind going and 开开眼界。
Judy: So, is it set?
Me: Set. But who's going?
Judy: Initially just me and another friend. But now got one more idiot joining. HAHA!
Me: Fine! Whatever la!
Judy: Ok la.. don't angry la.
Me: Whatever! Whatever! Who's that friend? Do I know him? (I purposely said him, because I was expecting that person to be her BF)
Judy: It's my **** (name of her water sports. Refer to post #1, where I mentioned she's engaged in a water sports) good friend. She's Alexis (fake name, obviously).
Me: She ok with me joining your girls' night out?
Judy: Should be ok. She's a friendly person la. Don't worry.
Me: I'm not, I just don't want the night to turn out awkward. So I meet you at **** or..?
Judy: We go together want?
Me: Ok, I pick you up at the usual bus stop (The bus stop near her house, the one which I always pick her up during the inter-sem).

I asterisked the name of the club because we created quite a ruckus that night. Will elaborate more later on.

So Saturday came. On the way to the bus stop, Judy whatsapp me.

Judy: Sorry will be late. You mind coming up my house first and wait?
Me: Ok. Unit number?
Judy: **-***
Me: 10 mins.

Message content was short because I was driving. After parking the car, I went up. Went to the door, and saw some familiar shoes outside. I pressed the doorbell and waited. I was expecting to see her family members or Alexis, so I was quite nervous and shy.

The door opened after a while. A long while. A Judy who has just finished showering opened the door. She was in this slightly oversized T-shirt and FBT shorts, with a towel on her shoulders.

Me: Wau lau.. a bit too long to open the door leh..
Judy: Hey! I thought I heard the doorbell. But then you never press again, so I thought I heard wrongly. But then I remembered you are coming up, so I checked through the door peephole and saw you! Why you never press again?!
Me: I.. don't know leh. Haha.
Judy: Come in come in!

After going in, I realized the house was empty. I saw a family photo on the coffee table. A family of 4 - Parents, her and another young lady. I didn't ask, but I assume its her younger sister. But the looks are far more inferior compared to Judy.

Me: No one at home?
Judy: Nope. My family went overseas without me. How loving.
Me: Huh? How come?
Judy: Because my Dad's company shutdown for 1 week, so last minute he wanted to bring us overseas. But then, this week I got 2 quiz!! Absolute sadness.
Me: Really leh. Where they go? When coming back?
Judy: Shanghai. Coming back next Wed. At night I think.
Me: Waa alone at home, quite shiok also la.
Judy: Yes la, if my boyfriend around still can 陪me.
Me: What you mean?
Judy: He went overseas training. India. Absolute sadness.

Her boyfriend was in OCS. I didn't know now OCS sends officers-to-be to India for training. And she has a new catch phrase: absolute sadness. For some reason, I've been using these two words recently.

Me: Can on TV?
Judy: Don't watch TV la. Come help me choose what to wear.

Til this moment, I thought what she told me was hints to tell me that she will be alone for the next few days, and thus trying to flirt with me. And since she asked me to go into her room, I duly obliged. I went in and sat on in front of the study table. She wiped her hair a little a while more with the towel, threw it onto the bed, and removed her baggy t-shirt.

Bra-less.
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Old 30-10-2011, 02:15 AM
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Re: My short story

quick time action coming. awesome!!!
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Old 30-10-2011, 02:43 AM
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Re: My short story

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Old 30-10-2011, 03:05 AM
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While facing the wardrobe, I remember very clearly that I was admiring her side views. She took out a black colour bra. She then bent down, carefully place her boobs into the cups, then skilfully slide her hands around the bra and hook it at the back. I remember this scene very well because of this conversation.

Me: Is that the legendary correct way of wearing a bra?
Judy: HAHA! What legendary!?
Me: You know.. some magazines will teach females how to put on bra to prevent developing side boobs..
Judy: Yes. You know a lot ah..
Me: A bit only la.. haha

By then, my cock was already stiff hard under my jeans.

She then took off her FBT shorts and revealed a plain colour panty. She took that off too, then changed it into a pair of black thongs. With red laces. I would say its very, very sexy. Then I see her bra again, and realized it has red lacing too.

Me: Pierre Cardin again?
Judy: *turned to me and smile* Smart.

My cock was about to explode. I wanted to find excuses to go to the toilet, but I don't want to miss any chance to admire that well-sculptured body of hers. Beautifully tanned skin will brilliantly curved waist.

She took out 1 dress and ask:

Judy: This ok?
Me: *wasn't in right frame of mind already* ok.. not bad.
Judy: How about this?
Me: I prefer the first one..
Judy: Or... this one better?
Me: Yah this one nice too..

She threw all 3 pieces onto the bed, and continue searching her wardrobe. Finally, I couldn't take it.

Me: Ju.

No response.

Me: Ju.
Judy: *turns head towards me* ya?
Me: Before deciding your dress, I think you deserved to be fucked. (exact words used)
Judy: *smile* why?
Me: Because you were obviously teasing me with your Pierre Cardin.
Judy: I was not. You think too much.
Me: I don't care.

I walked up to her and held her gently by the waist.

Judy: What do you want..?
Me: I've said it just now.
Judy: Haha.. you're tickling my waist la.. (exact words. I remember because I thought it was quite a turn off thing to say at that moment)

I shifted my hands lowers, onto the thongs.

Judy: Go close the windows and draw the curtains.

I did so obediently. After that, she was sitting on the edge of her bed. I went to her, and stroke her hair. She helped my remove my jeans and underwear.

Judy: You have condom?
Me: No.. you have?
Judy: Why would I have it at home.. you crazy ah..
Me: Then.. let this be the first time we do it without condom.

We have never had sex without protection before. It was her decision and I respected it all along.

Judy: Nope. Even when doing with my dearest I also insist.
Me: I will not shoot inside. Trust me.
Judy: Nope.
Me: I can control very well. Remember how I always give you warning? I will come out in time and shoot elsewhere.
Judy: Really..?
Me: Yes.

I thought to myself: BINGO. Raw on Judy. I couldn't wish for more. She gave me a smile, then slowly move her head towards my cock. A bbbj began. The feeling which I haven't had in weeks came back. My cock was never a match for Judy's mouth. When my cock is in her mouth, I would say its one of the best feelings in the world. The usual sucking, licking and stroking were all so familiar.

She pushed me backwards slightly, and knelt down on the floor. I always think that a girl kneeling down and blowing cock is a very turn on sight. Its like she's begging you to let her suck your cock. She continued blowing me in this position for a while, then she pushed me back again. Slowly, she pushed me until my back was to the wall. All the while my jeans were at my ankles, and she was moving forward slowly on her knees. She went on vigorous mode suddenly: in out in out.

Me: Ju.. slowly.. slow down a bit..

No response. Still going fast on me.

Me: Ju.. Slowly down.. I want to enjoy a while more..

Still no reaction. I placed my hands on her head, trying to stop her. But instead, she took my hands and pressed it against the wall.

Me: Ahhhh.. I'm cumming.. if you don't stop now..

Faster, and faster, she went. Better still, a no-hands bbbj on a guy who has been forced onto the wall.

Me: AHHHHH...

Cum in mouth on Judy, again. And still, she went on fast and hard on my cock, with my hands still pressed against the wall by her. She was in control that time. I didn't mind, simply because she was sucking my cock.

After showing me the process of swallowing my load, she took a tissue and wiped her mouth, then said:

Judy: Lucky we didn't have sex without condom. You couldn't even control. Just imagine if we did it without condom, those semen would have been in my vagina now.

Damn. It was then I realised it was a trap. And I fell into it totally. I couldn't reply her, because I don't know what to say. We went to the master-bed room toilet and cleaned ourselves up. I was a little bit embarrassed by the fact that 'I couldn't even control'. If you ask me, I would say most guys will kill just to have a CIM on Judy. No joke.

Judy: Are you ok or not? You look weird.
Me: Yup. Totally fine.
Judy: Ok~ then lets continue to help me choose a dress. We are going to be very late liao. I told Alexis to meet at 8.
Me: What? Its 8 now lo! Do you have any 时间观念?
Judy: *killer eyes look* Are you blaming me now?

Once again, totally muted by her. She is the biggest since she has just given me a bbbj. I looked through her dresses, and took out one. It looks exactly like this, I think she bought it from this blogshop:



Note: This girl is NOT Judy.

Judy: This one? Bareback leh..
Me: I think its nice ah. Very sexy. Very you.
Judy: Very me? Haha! What kind of description is that! Ok la, but then I cannot wear this bra liao..

She searched her drawers, and took out two pieces of plastic. Or was it silicone. They were better known as 'NuBra'.

Me: What are those?!
Judy: NuBra! To cover the boobs while not showing any straps. Noob leh you.
Me: Errrrrrrrr.. ok.. So you going to wear that..?
Judy: Yah~~ If not my bra back will be exposed!

With that, she took off her bra, exposing her pink nipples again. I was hard again. But I didn't want to let her think I'm a sex freak. She put on the Nubra, and then the dress.

I tell you all, she was STUNNING. All the while, I've only seen her in t-shirts. The other one time I saw her in a dress was the birthday lunch I had with her (refer to previous post on the birthday present). But that one was a normal plain dress. I was drooling over her sexy back. I didn't know until then, that a girl wearing a bareback can be so sexy.

Judy: Oei. How? Nice?
Me: Ya.. you look very.. beau.. beautiful.. beautiful.. (I was literally stuttering. NO JOKE.)
Judy: Why are you stuttering? Not nice right? You lying right?
Me: No~ you look.. really nice in this.. You might just.. just.. be the most beau.. tiful girl .. I've ever seen since so far..

I really, sincerely, wanted to praise her that way, and I was really stuttering, but not in that sequence as written. She smiled at me. A really beautiful smile. One that could melt any guy's heart with ease. And I could tell she was a little bit embarrassed by what I've said.

Judy: Ok la.. why you suddenly say that..
Me: I just.. I..
Judy: Ok. Got it. If nothing else, shall we go?

She took her wallet, BlackBerry, a cardigan and threw everything into her Samantha Vega bag. The birthday present which I got her.

Judy: Remember this? *pointing to bag*
Me: Yes of course.
Judy: I've been using it. It's my favourite pink too.
Me: I'm glad you like it.

We went to my car, and she directed me to a bus stop. Apparently, Alexis lives near her. Upon reaching the bus stop, Alexis got onto the car. She was wearing a half-length jacket, black spaghetti strip top and a TIGHT-FITTING OL style mini skirt.

Something like this:


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Ok. Time to sleep. Tomorrow I will try to finish the story. But I will need to study for a while before writing it. Quiz on Tuesday. Sianz.
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In this post, there will be minimal sexual content. I will touch on what happened in the club that led us to the crime scene - Judy's house.

And so, Alexis and I met for the first time. She is also slightly tanned due to the water sports. But she isn't as slim as Judy. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying she fat, in fact she's not even plump. Its just that Judy belongs to the slightly smaller frame group. She is also nice looking, but I would categorise her as cute. I have seen her in Judy's FaceBook page before, as they will take photos during their water sports outing. From all the bikini photos, she seems to have a slightly bigger pair of boobs than Judy. Her FaceBook page was set to private, so I could see nothing more than what Judy posted.

Judy: Alex, this is Burrito and Burrito, this is Alexis.
Me: Hi!
Alexis: Hi! Thanks for coming to fetch me.
Me: No problem. Any friend of Judy's is a friend of mine la.
Alexis: Haha ok thanks! Judy! Is that the Samantha Vega bag you told me about?
Judy: YES! I wanted to show you long ago! Look at the hot pink!
Alexis: So who, besides ****** (name of Judy's boyfriend), would give you such sweet present?
Judy: A close friend la. You don't know one.
Alexis: Guy or girl?
Judy: Guy friend.
Alexis: Is he trying to woo you or something?
Judy: Haha! Every guy in *** will fall for Judy! Don't you think so?!
Alexis: As usual, 自恋狂! Burrito, do you know who gave that to her?
Me: Errr.. No idea.. I only heard of LV, Gucci, Burberry, MiuMiu.. Never even heard of Samantha.. Samantha what ah?
Alexis: Ok, then I can eliminate you from the list. Don't even know what is Samantha Vega.

So the talk on handbags continued for sometime. Alexis also has a friendly character and the chat among the three of us were quite fun. Alexis then removed her half-length jacket and revealed fully her spaghetti top. Cleavage. Delicious cleavage. Even from the rear mirror, I could see it. Even the tight skirt was very appealing. But could not see any upskirt from my angle.

We reach the club pretty soon, parked and went to queue.

Me: Waa lau.. is that the queue?
Judy: Yes. Sua Ku.
Me: So are we going to queue until 2012?
Judy: HAHA! 2 your head la! Alex, this is the kind of lameness he is so capable of.
Alexis: Haha, I can tell! Ok, I shall work my power now.

Alexis is a VIP of the club. She could get the express queue and bring in a few friends on a weekend (does this expose the club?).

So in we go. The moment we went in, Judy and Alexis saw a few of their water sports friends. They intro-ed me to them, chatted a while and decided to join them. After a few drinks, Judy and Alexis decided to go to the dance floor. Judy grabbed me by my hand, and led me there.

Nowadays, club is such a happening place. Sorry for being a noob but I saw alot of girls dancing really closely to guys, literally body to body, chest to chest. But then from what I observed, the girls group and guys group parted way to their own tables afterwards. Which means they don't even know each other! I witnessed alot of boobs groping too. Not the straight forward outrageous kind, but the subtle, dance-and-slowly-move-the-hands-to-the-boobs kind. Not forgetting butt groping as well.

Then I went to the toilet, the moment I stepped in, I saw a girl coming out from the cubicle. I got a shock as I thought I went into the wrong toilet but then I saw the urinals. About 2 seconds later, a guy followed closely behind. He saw me, and simulated a blowjob gesture with his hand and mouth, indicating that he just had a blowjob from the girl. All with a smirk on his face.

The ruckus took place when I went out of toilet, back to the dance floor to look for Judy and Alexis. After a hard search, I finally found them. I saw 2 guys surrounding them, and one of them had his hands on Alexis' waist. Judy saw me and immediately gave me an SOS look. I went up and pulled Judy to to behind me, then took the hands on Alexis and swung it away hard. I stared at them and turned to leave. The guys came back and held my shoulders, and said something. But the music was so loud I couldn't hear a thing. I told Judy and Alexis to 'go, just go', then turned to confront the two ah bengs.

The ah bengs spoke in Hokkien, but I replied them in broken hokkien + english.
All conversation translated to english and only 50% accurate. Music was too loud to fully hear what they say.

Me: What do you want?
Ah beng 1: You just made me paiseh you know!
Me: I did? But what you did was disrespectful.
Ah beng 2: Guys come here to touch, girls come to be touched!
Me: I don't care if that's the way the other girls here are, but the two just now were my friends, and they were uncomfortable with your actions.
Ah beng 2: How you know! Maybe they were enjoying!
Ah beng 1: The girl never resisted my touch what!
Me: That doesn't mean she was enjoying, nor does she allowed you to touch her.
Ah beng 1: You don't want to talk reasons right!

They left without saying more, leaving me bemused there. Who were the ones who didn't want to talk reasonably? As I was trying to walk out of the crowd, once again, I was held back on my shoulders. This time round, both shoulders. They brought another 2 ah bengs this time round. 4 vs 1. I would be lying if I told you I wasn't scared. I am of average height, but not muscular. Lean at most. The two new ah bengs are taller and bulkier.

Ah beng 1: This guy. Bo kong li you (never talk reasons).
Ah beng 3: Jiao bin! Of course bo kong li you la!
Ah beng 4: I think the same as you!

All laughed.

Me: Mind your manners.
All ah bengs: What! what! You say us no manner is it? We show you our manners you want?!

The rest of the dance floor was dancing away from us, but keeping within viewing range. Typical Singaporeans, I guess.
I just looked at them, not knowing what to say. For everything I say, they would retort unreasonably. And I couldn't fight them too, due to the numbers disadvantage. But at this moment, some familiar faces popped out from behind me. The new guy friends I just made - Judy's and Alexis' friends. They are all from the water sports, so they generally have better build than me.

Friend 1: What happened?
Me: They took advantage of Ju and Alex.

At this moment, another friend dashed forward and wanted to punch the ah bengs, but was held back by Alexis and Judy.

This ruckus, was eventually settled when the bouncers came. Shortly after, a gentleman dressed in suits came along. I guess was the manager, or the in-charge. He recognised Alexis (VIP, remember?) and so he stood on our side. He ousted the ah bengs out of the clubs, and escorted us, 7 of us (Judy, Alexis, Me and the 4 new friends) back to our corner, and treated us 3 bottles of don't know what liquor as apology.

As I was driving, I didn't drink much and still, I clashed glasses with the new friends for being so supportive just now. Judy and Alexis were more shaken by the event though. After a while, they wanted to leave the club, and so I offered to drive them. Once again, the new friends, who were afraid that the ah bengs would ambush us outside the club, walked us back to the car, then they went off to another club. Club-hopping, I think is the right word to use here?

We took a bottle of the liquor and the guys took the other two. While in the car, I used my lameness to calm them down.

Judy: Sorry your virgin clubbing experience has to end this way.
Alexis: Your first time?! Don't look like! You bluff one right?
Me: Err.. really la..
Alexis: Really? Haha! 'cause you don't look that nerd!
Judy: See! Told you! I was shocked when he told me he never clubbed before.
Alexis: So what do we do with this? (showing the bottle. On closer look, I think I saw Vodka. But its a black colour bottle with crystals on it. Isn't Vodka bottles transparent?)
Me: You keep lo. Next time can drink. If we ever meet up again.
Alexis. Ok.. But why must next time? Now cannot?
Judy: Can! 择日不如撞日! We go my house and drink?
Alexis: Since when your Chinese so good? What does it mean?
Judy: It means.. we can drink now la! You ok? *looks at me*
Me: Ok ah. Your house there the multi storey carpark got visitor lot right?
Judy: What is visitor lots?
Me: Errr.. those white colour lots..
Judy: I don't know leh. Does it matter? My Dad always park level 2.
Me: That one is season parking la! I need to buy parking coupons.
Alexis: Near my house there got 7-11.

So we went there, as Alexis' house is near to Judy's.

And I bought more than just parking coupons.

Stay tuned.
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ya .... the game getting more exciting .....
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Old 30-10-2011, 08:03 PM
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Re: My short story

Upon entering the 7-11 that has no people, Judy and Alexis went to the counter, wanting to buy another bottle of Absolute Vodka. But this branch doesn't sell it. I went to the fridge to get myself some drinks. They came along, then took a few redbulls, 7-up and ribena.

Judy: Ahh shit. My wallet is in the car.
Me: Never mind, I'll pay for it la.
Judy: Thanks!
Me: You two go back first, help me look out for carpark attendant auntie.
Alexis: Haha! Okok!

They went off, then quickly came back.

Judy: Car keys?
Me: Oh! Nah, here.

I took the drinks, some titbits and went to the counter. I asked for parking coupons. While the cashier was back facing me, I glanced at the condoms. This time round, I remember myself taking two 3-pack durex Fetherlite. Then the cashier turned around. A malay. I remember him VERY well because of the following conversation. This conversation is 99% accurate.

Cashier: No more 50 cents. Do you want 2 of the $1 one?
Me: Its ok. Just one. And the overnight parking one.

He scanned the coupon and the drinks, then finally he saw the condoms. He grinned.

Cashier: This one yours also?
Me: Yes. *thinking WTF. Do you see anyone around?*

He paused. Then asked.
Cashier: For the two girls?

I looked at him, don't whether to cry or laugh. But I decided to keep cool, smile and say yes. Afterall, he wouldn't know if I will really get lucky. And if I do, it'll be the day of my life. And if I don't, I'll still be a hero in his eyes.

Me: You bet.
Cashier: Wow.. lucky chap.
Me: Thanks.
Cashier: If I were you, two boxes tak cukup.

Seeing him using malay, I used my vocabulary bank of broken malay learnt in one of the electives plus some that I learnt during my childhood, we had the following conversation.

Me: Apa la.. cepat bang. Tak cukup time already. (what la.. faster bro. Not enough time already.)
Cashier: Anda tahu malay juga? (You know malay too?)

And at this point in time, an auntie came in. I just wanted to leave as soon as possible.

Me: Sedikit la. Cepat bang, carpark auntie sudah datang sini. (A little bit la. Faster bro, carpark auntie is here already.)
Cashier: Haha, ok bang. They very cantik, tetek besar sia! (They very pretty, boobs very big!)

I bet he was refering to only Alexis as only her's were showing. I paid and left. Not wanting them to see that I bought condoms, I removed them from the boxes and slotted it into my jeans pocket. Well, at least it doesn't show the shape of a box in my pocket, so I guess its less obvious. Up til this point, I only had intentions to have sex with Judy. I didn't even think of Alexis because I thought it was impossible as I've just known her. But I bought 2 boxes because I was thinking of staying at Judy's house overnight, and the next day we could do something fun. The entire day.

But did it happen? Read on.

Back to the carpark, from far I could see them taking photos in my car due to the flashes.

Me: Vanity strikes again!
Alexis: And the bottle strikes your head! *gesturing to use the vodka to hit me*
Me: Ok relax! Why you all buy so much redbull and ribena?
Judy: To mix with the vodka lo!
Me: Like that one meh? Cannot drink directly from the bottle?
Alexis: You want to die ah!
Me: Why?
Judy & Alexis: HAHAHAHAHAA!

I don't know why, and I just drove off. Back to the MSCP at Judy's, I finally found a lot to park.

Judy: Why you park so high? Downstairs cannot?
Me: The lot talked to me and told me not to park there.
Judy: LAME~ So why? Here we need to walk very far leh.
Me: Downstairs season parking, I cannot park.

I took some time to explain to her. Apparently she doesn't know much about season parking and visitor parking lots. Slowly, we chatted and walked to her house.
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Old 30-10-2011, 08:08 PM
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Re: My short story

Exciting encounter coming up. Can't wait, but the story is going to end soon
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Re: My short story

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Exciting encounter coming up. Can't wait, but the story is going to end soon
Yes bro, that's why the title of this thread is 'My Short Story'.

I'm writing the next part now. I'm trying to break into shorter posts as I realised the previous posts are too long.
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Old 30-10-2011, 08:45 PM
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Re: My short story

wished i ha such a friend in uni. sounds like judy's my kind of gal too!
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