I was Naive (Story)

[Starter]

The next morning it was the same routine for me just that I had another new number to page. I got to the bus stop and met Evon, we had a small chat and I asked her to meet for lunch after school at J8 and she agreed.( yes it was part of my plan to use Evon to spite the girls) She told me she would page me when she reached, And I just told her that I would introduced my friends to her.

I went to school after that as my bus came and I will just skip the rest to the point that I was in my classroom.

I did not see Ah Kai at the morning assembly, but he came in late. Ah Kao was lifeless that day and I could see him laying on the table for most of the classes. But during recess it was a different picture as we sat at the bench of the canteen.

Ah Kai: kwah... Kwah Lan Jiao!!! ( see what see)

Yes, he was asking whomever that walk pass us this question, deliberately looking for trouble.

Ah Keong came and asked him to stop his nonsense, and I felt Ah Kai was no happy about it. As he got up spat on the floor and walked off.

Ah Keong: Your Brother crazy ah, anyhow find trouble?

Me: Keong, his mood not good lah, Evelyn Zhao Sai.

Keong: Knn, because of girl like that, pui.

Ah Keong got up and he walked off, I knew he was looking for Ah Kai and I followed him

[Alantino]

Originally Posted by jasonng

he just need to find another cai call evelyn lol

LOL great idea sia!

[KohOnly21]

Originally Posted by Alantino

LOL great idea sia!

Should add in his mother full name. When people ask say it's her mother's name and Evelyn is her ang mo mia

[Starter]

I ran after Keong, and soon saw him grabbing Kai on his collar.

Keong: Eh Kai, Gao Liao Hor ( enough of your nonsense)

I wanted to go pull them apart, but Keong shouted at me warning me not to get involved as this was their gang's business.

Kai: Tao eh, Diao Chwee Heng wah. ( Boss, get men for me)

Keong: why?

Kai: I want to go beat that bastard.

Keong: If it is because of that, no

Ah Kai pulled Ah Keong's hand off: I dun want to follow you, I go Zai dui (home base) find Orh Pah.

Ah Kai walked off and i tried holding him back, he too flung my hand off him. That was the first time I saw Ah Kai in such a rage, perhaps Evelyn was really very important to him.

[Starter]

Originally Posted by ris2099

lolz, ah kai had tatooed evelyns name and now got 2 timed some more... hes my favorite supporting char as he is the comedic relief of the story... nice update bro Starter.

Not bad ah, Ah Kai also got fans ah. Lolz

[hunghingboy]

Rabak la kai... diao zui to beat 3rd party.no wonder keong dulan.

[energybost]

Fierce leh. Wonder who the the other guy is.

[skl8188]

Got a feeling that Lawrence is the guy

[Starter]

Ah Keong came to me after Ah Kai walked off.

Keong: Sorry, I did all I could,

Me: I know. ( the gangs have their own code of conduct and when you are in a gang, don't mean that they will fight for you on every issue, this rule is frim esp in case like Ah Kai's which concerns purely BGR)

Keong: Your Brother, you better talk to him, carry on like that sure he will get in trouble.

I nodded my head and did not say much. I believe even I could not stop Ah Kai from what he wishes to do.

Keong: Pai seh( sorry) I go first, I need to go zai dui (home base) see what Kai is doing.

I asked Keong to go and I returned to my class, the more I thought about things the more I felt Ah Kai was reckless does he even know who the guy was?

I ended class and paged the girls to meet outside the food court. They arrived after me and they went on to order as usual, they came back and I teased Jasmine.

Me: Eh Jasmine today never order wrong ah?

Jasmine: No!

I remained at my seat and did not go to order my food.

Ann: Lawrence, you not eating?

I just smiled at Ann and my pager beep.

Me: my Friend is here.

The girls looked at me and I Guess they were puzzled.

I went out of the foodcourt and found Evon before bring her to the table.

Me: girls this is Evon

[Johnnykhan]

another cat fight coming up i guess??

[JorgeM]

Originally Posted by energybost

Fierce leh. Wonder who the the other guy is.

Was wondering too haha

[Starter]

The girls stopped their eating, as they look up at Evon.

I point towards the girls and I introduced them: This is Felicia, and this is Jasmine and that is Ann, oh Jasmine and Ann might become my God Sister. (Since their Father offer I thought why not improvise)

Evon waving to the girls: Hi

I could see Ann looking at me and Felicia was really checking Evon out looking from top to bottom. Jasmine stared at me after the statement that I made about the god sisters and I told the girls that I will go order my food with Evon.

While walking at around the food court I walked closely beside Evon chatting with her.

Evon: Lawrence, any of those girl is your gf?

Me: Nope.

Evon: so they are?

Me: Oh they are my study mates, Ann tutors me and jasmine tutors Felicia.

Evon smiled and we ordered our food. ( I deliberately ate the same thing with Evon)

We returned to the table and the girls were hostile, they did not really talk to Evon. I was the only person talking to Evon with 3 pairs of eye looking at me.

After lunch, Evon said she need to go. I believe she sense that the girls did not really like her. She wave goodbye to all of us and I Guess u was the only one responding.

After Evon walked off, Jasmine glared at me: I think we need to talk again.

Jasmine walks in front as Felicia walked beside me shaking her head, Ann looked disappointed for once there was no smile on her face.

Me: Go where?

Jasmine: Your home!

[Sgchiongster]

Oooo, I sense a stormy sea that might just erupt into a group sex.......keep writing, bro.
Seems like there's a sudden surge of writers in this forum, but ur story will always have my full support. Not to mention Veron is a fan of your works.

/A**

[KingxD]

Starter bro do you have links to other stories you have written? Keep up the good work !

[Ubud]

Loved the update TS